I officially can say that Tale of The Cattail Forest has entered its fourth draft. While The Cattail Forest isn’t expansive like Narnia or Middle Earth, you still can show a lot. The main locations are Fairy Creek and Graysloup- I did find a way to describe the first location of where The Fairy Creeks used to live. Some of my rewrites are feeling like first drafts. I am actually getting more backstory in this fourth draft. I need to show it more on characters. I have more than one interesting character. I am actually starting to describe what these characters look like, which is important. So I am on my fourth draft.